Daniel
AP Spanish
8/31/07
Mensaje elctrónico. Imagina que escribes a un(a) amigo(a) por correspondencia de México que acaba de saber que va a asistir a tu colegio el año entrante, come estudiante de intercambio.
Informal Writing Practice 1
Buen saludes amiga. Estoy feliz que vas as a asisitir a mi colegio. No puedo esperar para el año entrante. El colegio es muy grande y hay muchas actividades que hacer. Hay actividades escolares de ciencias y matematicas. En esos actividades tienen competencies en que puedes participar. Cuando vienes al colegio tienes que estar preparado. Esté preparado para conferencias y examens del libro y de apuntes. Si necesitas ayudar yo voy a estar ayi tambien.
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3 comments:
¡Vas a asustar tu amiga! Nuestro colegio es fácil.
Student Writer:
Daniel
Student Reviewer:
Brianna
Assignment:
Informal Writing #1
Date:
9/14/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
2
The assignment is interesting to read.
4
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
3
The sentences relate to each other.
2
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
It was interesting.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
Why should your friend join in on activities at the school? What else is there to do there?
Some suggestions for next time:
Elaborate on your ideas. Furthermore, try not to use one sentence for an idea. Prhaps use two or three. That way the reader can understand why you are suggesting certain ideas.
Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer:
Daniel
Student Reviewer:
Christine
Assignment:
Informal Writing #1
Date:
9/20/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
You warned them about the work load.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
N/A
Some suggestions for next time:
Talk more about the clubs and other activities our school has to offer.
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