Paz

El Día Internacional de Paz es el 21 de septiembre. Se celebran en Colombia puero no son muchas calles que hablan de paz. Algunos no saben el día internacional a la paz en Colombia. El conflicto tiene mucha violencia, que unos profesores dicen que es como los conflictos de Sudan o Iraq(Fuente 2). En Colombia se parace imposible por que la problema es la estructura social. Con muchas lágrimas y miedos las personas están cansados de estó. La tema no es la paz para algunas personas. “Si no hubiera terrorismo y fuerzas armadas existiría la paz”(Fuente 1).





Writing Rubric: Self-AssessmentName: Daniel Date: September 14, 2007Assignment: PazBefore writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.yes I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.yes I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.yes I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.no I try to make my writing interesting.yes I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.no I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.yes I make sure the sentences relate to each other.yes I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.yes If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.no I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.yes I check my spelling.yes I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).yes I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).yes I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.no I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:I did very well on the subject paz and managed to relate to both articles.
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:I need to improve more about relating the subject to outside of the articles and try to relate it to myself.