Hay muchas problemas en la ambiente. Fuente 1 digo que la mayors problemas son las contaminaciónes de la agua y del los desechos. Tambien hemos producido mucha basura y humop de los coches. La gente botan la basura en el piso y no en la bota de basura. Como tenemos coches, grandes factorías, los aerosols y otras cosa que hacen daño a la ambiente, no es una suprisa que hemos destruido la tierra. Fuente 2 dijo que debemos proteger la biologia de la tierra. Tambien dijo que transporte de coasas en barco es peligroso. Se puede mirar en el pasado que barcos se pueden chocar y pueden contaminar el ambiente Los dos fuentes cuentan de la misma tema. La tema es que hay una mayor problema ambiental, no solo en la comunidad, pero en todo la tierra. Tenemos que recuperar la tierra.
Writing Rubric: Self-Assessment
Name: Daniel Date: 10/11/07
Assignment: Formal Writing #3
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.yes
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.yes
I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.yes
I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.no
I try to make my writing interesting.yes
I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.no
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.yes
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.yes
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.yes
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.yes
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.yes
I check my spelling.no
I check my spelling.no
I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).yes
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).yes
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.no I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:I think I did well on comparing the two articles and using details as examples
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:Next time I need to focus more on spelling and be specific on the details
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:I think I did well on comparing the two articles and using details as examples
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:Next time I need to focus more on spelling and be specific on the details
3 comments:
Peer Assessment
Student Writer:
Daniel
Student Reviewer:
Karina
Assignment:
Formal Writing #3
Date:
10.11.07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
It showed points from the two articles
I have the following questions about your assignment:
what does "humop" mean?
Some suggestions for next time:
Student Writer: Daniel
Student Reviewer: Roger
Assignment: Formal Writing
Date: 10/12/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
4
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment: You did very well communicating the veiws of others.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
What are your views?
Some suggestions for next time:
Add a more personal touch, maybe a bit longer.
Dany's spanish writing in this blog shows an overall improvement over his earlier attemps at writing in his native language. Truth be told I have not seen much of his spanish writing in recent years, however I was happily surprised when reading his blog. Though there is still room for improvement, Dany' writing still shows more than adequate understanding of spanish grammar and spelling.
Heber
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