Luis Ernesto romero es un heroé en El Ssalvador. Hico los Homies Unidos para ayudar a jovenes. Los ayudan con las problemas de drugas y salud. Los ayudan a jovenes que son pandilleros para que se salgan de esa vida. Ya he ayudado a 1.250 jovens salir de pandillas. Luis fue parte de una pandilla y sabe la vida muy bien. Paro de ser pandillero cuadno nació su hijo. Cuando nació el sabia que tenía una nueva responsabilidad y pore so salio de la pandilla. He ayudado jovenes buscar trabajos.
Writing Rubric: Self-AssessmentName: Daniel
Date: 10/19/07
Assignment: Luis Ernesto Romero
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.no
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.no
I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.yes
I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.no
I try to make my writing interesting.yes
I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.no
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.yes
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.no
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.yes
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.yes
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.yes
I check my spelling.yes I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).yes
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).yes
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.no I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:I put background infor on Luis
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:Be more organized and mention what he is doing now.
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2 comments:
Student Writer:
Daniel
Student Reviewer:
Brianna
Assignment:
Formal Writing #1
Date:
10/09/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
4
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
3
The assignment is interesting to read.
4
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
3
The sentences relate to each other.
4
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
4
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
4
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
3
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
I liked that it had a lot of facts.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
Where is El Ssalvador?
Some suggestions for next time:
Proofread your finished project and write more.
Peer Assessment
Student Writer:
Daniel
Student Reviewer:
Kaina
Assignment:
Formal Writing #1
Date:
10.11.07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
It had lots of examples
I have the following questions about your assignment:
Some suggestions for next time:
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